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The topic- The time when i fought a boy who was bullying my younger…
The topic- The time when i fought a boy who was bullying my younger brother.
1- I need help writing a fragmented ideology narrative
Brainstorm the following details: Who, What, When, Where, Why. Who was there (what were they wearing, doing, saying, etc) What was happening around you (sounds, smells, textures, setting details, etc). When did this happen (season, date, setting details, etc)? Where were you (be specific: details details details)? Why was this happening (what caused it, what led up to this moment, what followed
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who- two middle school boys and my little brother same age as them, the two boys appeared to have khaki shorts with one bright orange shirt and one black shirt. my little brother had on black jeans and black and white shirt- my little brother had a bicycle, and they were snatching it from him aggressively.
what- it was in the middle of the summer; my mom was cooking while I was looking out the living room window looking at what was happening between my brother and this two boys.
when- summer time, it was humid, it was in Chicago.
where- outside our house, the floor was concrete sunny and this two boys snatching my brother bicycle while he was attempting to snatch it back from them
why- these two boys approached my younger brother while he was outside riding his bike, all of sudden i heard a commotion going on between them and i peaked through our living room window, i was witnessing this two boys bullying my brother into giving them his bike, i could hear my brother saying “no dont touch my bicycle” but they still proceeded to aggresively retrieve it from him, so i took it upon myself to go protect him from this two boys, when i approached them they laughed at me so i decided to physically hit them since they thought it was funny to bully my little brother..etc
